The Last Ride Together! Poem by Shahzia Batool

The Last Ride Together!

Rating: 3.5


Dur hona he naa guzeer magar
hey jo janay me thori der agar

aao kuchh dur mil k sath chalen
aao kuchh der tk to sath chalen

chaand ko, kehkashan ko, taaron ko
or khilti hui baharon ko

or khud apne dil ko dhoka den
mil k tanhayyon ko dhoka den

un ko ehsas bhi na ho paey
raaz afsha kaheen na ho jaey

hum me pehle si dosti na rahi
raastay hen alag magar phir bhi

koi herat, qalaq, malaal nhi
mere dil me tera khayal nhi

iss lye khud fareb khanay se
sir ta paa dukh me doob janay se

laakh bahtar he in ko dhoka den
apni tanhayyon ko dhoka den

aao kuchh der mil k sath chalen
aao kuchh dur tk to sath chalen

asma'n se barastay baadal ko
mouj ko, kashtiyon ko, saahil ko

apnay hi aansuo'on ko dhoka den
sub ko hum muskura k dhoka den

aakhri pal hen hans k sath chalen
akhri baar mil k sath chalen! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deep Mukherjee 31 January 2012

Yes; unique from any other poem i have read here; but more beautiful :) thank you for sharing.....

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Ramesh Rai 06 February 2012

kitni acchi likhti hain aap. ab main bhi apni juban ki kuchh kavitayen post karunga.

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Bri Edwards 18 December 2016

i was 'with you' until the third stanza. then i fell asleep. : ( bri

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Jahan Zeb 29 January 2013

Jin se Mil kar zindagi se ishq ho jaye wo log Aap ne Shayad na dekhey ho magar aisey bhi hein Kuch kehne ki meri majal nahi. Akhri 3 bando ne to had kardi. Lajawab Batool.

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Wahab Abdul 25 February 2012

A very nice poem, i feel the effect of the poem on my soul.

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Cg Shankar 20 February 2012

aao kuchh der mil k sath chalen aao kuchh dur tk to sath chalen so pleasing an invitation that no man with a loving heart can reject. Sat chelenge jarur, Par karke pahd, Milkar sitaaronse, Chandini ka sundarata milke peekarke, sat chelenge Sahazia! very sweet poem my sweet friend.

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Soulful Heart 16 February 2012

beete hue lamhon ki mahek saath to hogi.........khabonm hi mein ho chahe mulaaqat to hogi.........people come and go from our lives but their imprints stay on for ever.......moulding and painting our personalities with each parting.......

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