The Last Night Poem by Terry jones

The Last Night

Rating: 5.0


as the nights come and the days go
i relize more and more how you are low
and yet as i try to healp
it seems that i only make it worse
i whud stop healping but i cant
and yet i relize more all you want is someone who cares
so tell me now whut has you down
for this shal be the last night you spend alone

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Annie Girl 03 April 2009

nice....i like it alot......

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James Mclain 25 March 2009

You have done a fine job here..great beginnings..very well done..thank you..iip :)

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Tiffany Fawcett 25 March 2009

I like it very much. Umm.... had a couple of typos.... try to not rush when typing. I know I make mistakes as well. Though very good point. Thanks for telling me to read this.

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Kyle Jones 25 March 2009

Well written, not much to say in the field of criticism, possibly pour some more out. it's a great deep poem and placed well with others like it

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Serenity Prayer 25 March 2009

very nice. this poem shows that you are a good friend.

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