The Last Days - The Crucifixtion Poem by Lacey UnKnown
The Last Days - The Crucifixtion
As I hang here, stuck on this cross
I pray to my Father that not all is lost
I want them to see, I want them to know
The reason I'm here is only to show
To show them the love my Father shows me
I want them to understand, but I still hear them scream
They scream for my death, rejoice at my pain
They don't unerstand, this is all for their gain
For those who hate me to gain a new life
Yet still they struggle, and still they strife
But for now I will hang here, stuck on this cross
And pray to my Father that not all is lost
wow..i really love this poem...it really gives a good picture of the Savior on the cross.... praise be to Him.
wonderful abstract poem, deep ideas well embedded, lovely rhymes, be blessed.10++++
Wow Wow Wow. This is beautiful and well written. The vision of Christ on the cross wanting to reach out even to the ones who are crucifying him is breathtaking. I truely love this poem! A 10 my friend. Dwayne
God is Good, you have written a very nice piece. It is so Wonderful to know god is with us every day we are not ever alone. When we open our mind to him he fills us to overflowing.
You are truly talented. This poem is awsome and one I for one would be proud of. Great Job! I think you brought across the emotion quite well what Jesus thought, and felt on the cross.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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What a deep reflection of your heart and faith remembering the supreme sacrifice made fy the Son of man to save humanity from death and sin. Great poem and thanks for sharing. best wishes with the blessing s of the Holy Family. melvin