The Last Dance Poem by Milan Van Zuyen

The Last Dance

Rating: 4.0


She danced with Death
A beat, a breath
Her soul in his palm
Still, she remained calm

Barefeet capering on hallowed ground
No salvation herein to be found
Smiling, Death took the lead
Holding her closer than there was need

For she would not think to run
And as for tears, she had none
Reveling without remorse
Knowing Fate has set its coarse

Long had she awaited this day
With the Reaper come to sweep her away
Spinning, twirling, her body a blur
For a moment, Death was unsure

Laughing merrily without a care
With gentle waves in her long sable hair
Death captures her mouth in a bitter kiss
Of eternal bliss

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Completed (08/15/2012)
Of my own works this is one of my personal favorites. (At least out of my works that are still in my possession) The beginning and the base format originally came to me late one night as I was trying to fall asleep. But it was so lovely in a macabre sort of way that I had to put it to paper before it was lost forever to the forgetfulness of sleep.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazel Durham 12 September 2012

A deep and powerful poem with great rhythm and style the darkness is captured beautifully.

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Leslie Philibert 29 August 2012

Like this, a good write with solid rhymes and structure.

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Milan Van Zuyen

Milan Van Zuyen

Boulder Colorado
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