The Knot Poem by Asrar Rasheed

The Knot

Rating: 4.2


These are the words of my restlessness,
Like nothing is in my hands tonight;
Should I pour the drops of my wishes?
Or hold them tightly to break;

Or should I take you away and then leave?
Tell me something that I can do tonight,
The noise of your breath keeps it burning;
Let me hold it and burn into ashes,

Every day it is always the first time I see u,
These are the words of my restlessness;
The winds of your breath seem to end here,
And I can't feel where it is burning;

The knots of the wishes aren't unfolding,
I am still the knock of your closed doors;
Let me open, let us untie the wishes,
These are the words of my restlessness…

Friday, May 26, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: sad
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 30 May 2017

The knots of the wishes aren't unfolding, I am still the knock of your closed doors; Let me open, let us untie the wishes, restlessness presented in a wonderful and original way. thank you dear poet. tony

1 0 Reply
Jazib Kamalvi 26 May 2017

A beautiful start indeed. Thanks

1 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Asrar Rasheed

Asrar Rasheed

Lolab (Indian Occupied Kashmir)
Close
Error Success