The Kites Poem by Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh

The Kites



On a summer’s day
Some boys are flying their kites
In the vast blue sky.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alicia Meyers 25 January 2012

I like it. Even though, it's short, I like it. :)

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Unwritten Soul 23 January 2012

On a summer day a boy fly his dream together with his kite and watch them high to touch the sky On a summer day a lil boy cry saw his kite falling down to reach blue sky his dream cant get but the boy tries again what a spirit, of a boy we have to learn On a summer day_Unwritten SOul

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Kevin Halls 22 January 2012

I like the imagery of this haiku.Only three lines but it sets a nice scene of childhood. Well done.

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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