The Island Poem by Barry Middleton

The Island



where is the island I seek
too small for predation
but for hungry sea birds
that circle and dive for fish

grass huts and shanties
open to the quiet breeze
never locked nor need be
for the tribe is a family

coconut and mango grow
greens and herbs plentiful
as are fish and breadfruit
the earth feeds the people

where is the island garden
once here beneath my feet
shall it never come again
as a dreamer awaits mercy

Monday, February 29, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: eden,paradise,waiting
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dimitrios Galanis 29 February 2016

I have to read it again and again to understand or feel it Its sounds in harmony though!

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Barry Middleton 29 February 2016

Free verse is something I feel compelled to structure by the length of the line sometimes. Sometimes it works, sometimes it doesn't.

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