The Inner Beauty Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

The Inner Beauty

Rating: 5.0


In every star
A cute sunflower lives
We can't see her
Except the light she gives

The hidden oasis
In every desert
Voice of water
Classical concert

Your radiant smile
Form of flower
The inner beauty
Love's power

(2008/5/31)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
~ Jon London ~ 03 June 2008

Persian my friend, you never fail to amaze...you open every-ones eyes to such beautiful things.....you're a great poet...'10' best wishes Jon

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Jing Jing 04 June 2008

in every star a beautiful sunflower, my favorite flower, nice poem

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Andre Lopez 04 June 2008

a graceful poem! i like it

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Kesav Easwaran 07 June 2008

This poem is a star la sunflower…beautiful imaginative and thought provoking. One of the best among poems I read in ph recently. Congrats Shiraz! *10*

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M M 31 May 2008

Radiance of the inner part can be felt and unveiled in every being. Your words showed it very beautifully for those who want to see. A very lovely poem.

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Sarah Atieno 14 November 2008

This is luvly. I'm amazed don't know what to say but give you a 10.

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Carol Rhodes 10 November 2008

ANOTHER BEAUTY. YOUR THOUGHTS/IMPRESSION ARE MINE AND MINE YOURS. I CALL SMILES AND HUGS MEDICINES. FOR THOSE LUCKY ENOUGH TO MEET PEOPLE WHOSE EYES SHINE FIRST BEFORE THEIR LIPS, WELL, WE ARE BEING TREATED TO A TRUE CONNECTION AND COMPLETION OF OURSELVES AND THEM. PURE MAGIC. CAROL

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Tsira Goge 07 October 2008

Nightingale, beautiful and surprising poems, you fantastically whistle my friend... 10... Tsira

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Paul Hamer 11 June 2008

And flowers of beauty rose above the reeds: the winds of change scattering their seeds.

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... ... 09 June 2008

Awwww, is a very pretty poem! ! ! It really speaks to me. Bravo, my nightingale!

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