The Idea Of An Idea Poem by Salema Khatun

The Idea Of An Idea

Rating: 3.8


So many ideas you have conceived
Either at work or leisure,
But you have not perceived, the idea of me.
I am the idea, unconceived, the idea of anti reason,
Upheaval-tumultuous and juxtaposition.

I will break the old piece by piece
and create the new step by step, bit by bit.
i will stop the working of the logic and the reason,
with all the right justification.

The junk has to go.....
The new has to come....
We need to keep...
We need to continue the germination.

An idea remains an idea till it is materialized
No knowledge is workable untill it is realised.
No idea is an idea
If it does not remove ignorance and poverty
It will be an Utopian idea, guilty of impracticality.

I am here the unconceived idea
The new definition
The new perception
The true beauty, the true perfection
I know I am the dream, if you are after me
You will get fulfilled your much desired aspiration.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Leslie Philibert 16 February 2014

You write well, but this is, I feel, a bit lost, that needs more a specific contact to a real situation...this just drifts off and has so not the emotional impact your work deserves..

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Dave Walker 18 December 2011

Like it, a poem to make you think. A great write.

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Vipins Puthooran 18 December 2011

But old is gold! ! ! ! A good poem! !

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Sajna Kailas 19 December 2011

salema, Your idea is good. but 'old is gold' respect old heritage and love the new trend. hopeful and inspiring poem. keep it up! !

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Viraj Gupta 20 December 2011

i really like this poem. my one suggestion would be to try to make it a little longer. its a great piece of work and it would be graet if you expressed your thoughts more with a few more lines. thats just my thoughts though. its a great poem nonetheless.

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M Asim Nehal 09 January 2017

This is wonderful poem on muses. No idea is complete without we in it.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 16 February 2015

very nice poem and congratulation to be selected as poem for the day

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Allan Farran 17 February 2014

I enjoyed this poem so tantalizing into wanting more

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Mangesh Janbandhu 16 February 2014

The way you sustain the idea from this poem is mesmerisable. The idea of an idea, the dream of the dream & the passion of the passion comes together in your beautiful creation... Congratulation..!

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Savita Tyagi 16 February 2014

At some metaphysical level the poem makes a lot of sense. We are able to conceive the idea and see it manifested but never know the power behind the creation of idea. Enjoyed the poem.

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Salema Khatun

Salema Khatun

murarai birbhum west bengal
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