Salema Khatun (27th may 1980 / murarai birbhum west bengal)

I think this poem is actually about the idea of an idea (i.e the idea behind conceiving an idea) and I think the speaker of this poem is not the poet but the idea.

Yes, the idea is speaking to us about how he(a perfect idea) could be concieved and how it would help in wiping the -ve things off the face of this world and how the peace of mind & soul could be achieved.

BTW, nice poem...perfect literary sense combined with perfect ryhming in a poem gives a BLOCKBUSTER........as I think that poems with good literary sense but little or no rhymin could've been even more better with it..........and your poem has both so it's a BLOCKBUSTER...

An idea remains an idea till it is materialized
No knowledge is workable untill it is realised.
No idea is an idea
If it does not remove ignorance and poverty
It will be an Utopian idea, guilty of impracticality.


this stanza reminds me of Russell's celebrated essay: Ideas -that have harmed mankind...it also has something to do with the utopian ideals....your poem is meaningful & v good...

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Very very beautiful piece, , I admire you use logic with the rhyme...quite a rare thing to view, , Mind is rational, and you can feed it with naught but reason, , , so your poem is a food for the mind...well done poet 10

This certainly is evokative and shakes up the old paradigm well considered.

the last stanza is beautiful.wonderful ink.keep inking.

Ideas are like sperms.They are an army of millions like me spitting everyday.But one lucky one has the key to be the man, to be hero without the prior knowledge he actually has had it.Otherwise ideas die and terminate to ideas again somehow.Somewhat evolutioned.Perhaps dreams they are called from desired aspirations.

Your idea of poetry is better as mine.It can lead to more ideas as such.So dream on and egg on more ideas..

This is simply spectacular :) I completely agree with your poem, that there is so few people who dream and believe in illogical things, but you, and I are a couple of them. Brava!

A very well expressed thought.
Trully beautiful!

Indeed the world has progressed with the conceived idea for progress and love i.e the population...thanks for the ideas...regards