The Hurt Doesn't Show Poem by Elena Plotkin

The Hurt Doesn't Show



The tears don't seem to run,
when you're offering me a rose.
The hurt doesn't seem to show,
when you're holding me close.
When you're dancing with me,
to our favorite love song,
I can't seem to recall,
what you did that was so wrong.
You twirl me around,
and around and around,
And suddenly I'm more lost
than I ever was found.
And when your lips touch my own,
it's like I'm standing,
in quicksand.
And when you dip me over your arm,
I think,
what is the harm
if I succumb,
once more to your charm
and get lost,
in your smile
while you stare,
deep into my eyes?
Who cares,
if your broken promises
shoo away like flies?
Of course, I am weak,
and easily misled,
by the sweet words,
that you fill in my head.
But what can I say,
that you don't already know?
I'll always fall
for the dog and pony show.
It should be very clear,
if it isn't already.
My heart never beats
so loud or so steady,
As when I believe,
in the fairytale of today,
And ignore all the lies,
that you sprouted yesterday.

(C) 2016 Copyright Elena Plotkin

Monday, December 19, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: lies,love,relationship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 11 July 2017

favorite lines so far: and around and around, And suddenly I'm more lost than I ever was found.......................don't tell me! written by a WOMAN about some bad MAN! ! ! : (( and: what is the harm if I succumb, once more to your charm and get lost, in your smile.............yikes! ! ! i'm not convinced that shoo is used properly, but.............i understand, i think. 'You' are weak and shooing (away) the 'broken promises'. YES, you later say you are weak. bingo! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - shoo SHo͞o/ exclamation exclamation: shoo 1. a word said to frighten or drive away a person or animal. verb verb: shoo; 3rd person present: shoos; past tense: shooed; past participle: shooed; gerund or present participle: shooing 1. make (a person or animal) go away by waving one's arms at them, saying “shoo, ” or otherwise acting in a discouraging manner. I went to comfort her but she shooed me away - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - and: My heart never beats so loud or so steady, As when I believe, in the fairytale of today, - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - i play it safe and don't make too many 'promises'! ! ! but i still get kicked in the teeth once in a while and my mate feels the same way............once in a while. and so the story goes! ; ( to MyPoemList maybe a showcase poem? i hope this isn't (often) the story of Elena's life. bri :)

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