The Hidden Treasure Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

The Hidden Treasure

Rating: 5.0


He managed to convince
The sunflower of his love
She made the nightingale aware
Of looking straight and above

Love is not gazing at each other
Or oneself
It is looking together
Towards the self

(2008/7/8)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tsira Goge 08 July 2008

Very beautiful poems and why that I have recollected an immortal still-life: Van Gogh's sunflower... Sing a nightingale, sing, if wish to live. Thanks for the letter my friend. Tsira

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Thad Wilk 08 July 2008

The hidden treasure of love, a thought provoking poem, wonderfully expressed! *10* Magically capturing - these words you profess! Friend Thad

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Lynda Robson 09 July 2008

A wonderful captivating write, as always so full of wisdom, thanks Amir, 10 Lynda xx

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Eu Stress 09 July 2008

Insightful composition! You have discovered the profound secret of love. This poem is worth quoting.

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... ... 09 July 2008

As the title said, this poem is a treasure. Bravo!

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palattadeborah@gmail.com 24 April 2018

Hidden treasure T.mark

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a wonderful and deep thought in this poem

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Seema Chowdhury 13 July 2008

a very sweet love poem.

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Rani Turton 10 July 2008

Lovely profound write. Thanks, Nightingale.

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Rema Prasanna 09 July 2008

A lovely write.. well expressed.. Rema

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