.the Hero Within Poem by Adeline Foster

.the Hero Within

Rating: 5.0


.The Hero Within

Limit yourself to the easy
and the difficult you'll never try.
Easys need live on the fringe of the world
grubbing for nickels and dimes,
Claiming that life has dealt a cruel blow;
crying: the fault is not mine.
Heros need training to do the grand deeds
that earn them a hero's acclaim
It's setting your eye on the hero inside,
knowing you're fair to the game.
Knowing you've got what it takes to be tough
no matter how rough life may be.
I'm a hero, I know it! When my actions show it
it's because I'm a hero to me.

Tuesday, May 8, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: poem,courage
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Saadat Tahir 08 May 2012

hi dear Adeline...good day loved yer lines a fabulous message and reminds one of the classical and philosophical sages the time of kings and princes sent to caves and raves for making heroes out of em.... inadvertently i drifted to my fave homer and loved the message in yer poem thanx very nice indeed blessed be sat :)

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Joe Foster 09 May 2012

has a good message to it. i like it. Read some of mine if you like and tell me what you think.

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Simon Collins 13 May 2012

Nice words Adeline, very true, thank you for the inspiration

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Daniel Brick 05 March 2014

I like the trenchant tone of this poem. You won't coddle the whiner and say, There, there, it'll be OK. Instead it's a summons to the quest that you declare. Your poem reminds me of some of the wonderful things Joseph Campbell said to Bill Moyers (and all of us, really) in THE HERO'S ADVENTURE, when he emphasized we are each of us the hero of our own individual life. And like Campbell, you argue convincingly that each of us can find that heroic quality within, the real challenge is to exercise it, bring it out in the open, use it creatively. Thanks for your confidence in us! It's so much better than mere sympathy.

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John Brown 28 October 2012

A magical little poem. I like it very much.

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Beth Johnson 02 July 2012

Feeling good about yourself is hard these days.I like the fighter in you.I saw you on Theos list, Marvellous! beth

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Swetha Vanakayalapati 25 June 2012

I'm a hero, I know it! When my actions show it it's because I'm a hero to me. so true......

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Joseph Anderson 16 May 2012

Great philosophy. Another thought invoking, uplifting and well rendered poem, as I expected. Deserving a rating

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Adeline Foster

Adeline Foster

Instructor of poetry, Hagerstown, MD
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