The Heart Within Poem by louis rams

The Heart Within

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the sound of the heart
does it go thump, thump, or pitter patter?
i guess it really does'nt matter.

for a broken or crying heart
can not be heard beating in your chest
it tries to hide everything
to its very best.

it does not want the world to see
' its vulnerbility '.
but when you look into that persons eyes
you know that it does not tell a lie.

the pain is etched on their face, and the emotions
in the movement of their body
they know they can not hide it.

and as GOD will have it be
love sets the soul free.
so when you have a broken or crying heart
then it's time that you part.

part from the things that got you
to this point
and start your life anew
and forget the pain and solitude.

love is the key to all of life
it frees you from daily struggles and strife.
look at the moon beams covering this earth
showing the beauties and all its worth.

now picture the man who gave all
this to you.
HE had an aura, a glow around his frame
and HE held his heart, outside his chest
this heart beating without rest.

the heart was seperate from him
relieving us of the pains and sins.

so if the sound is thump, thump or pitter patter
it does'nt really matter.
HE gave his heart to you
just so you'll know what to do.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

you see.. linda saw what I saw.. I say perfect....

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Kranthi Pothineni 26 March 2009

Nice title. The context is really good. The repetition of this words 'thump, thump, or pitter patter? ' is really good. The pain can't be hided thats true. But parting with them, some how i don't agree with it. A nice message is there in this page of 'The heart Within' thanks for sharing.

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Linda Winchell 25 March 2009

No one man could ever realize the pain of heart Jesus must have felt that day at Calvary. Ten for this one Sir Louis! You are getting so much better since you have been in God's presence more. God Bless U! Linda

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