The Greatest Love Poem by louis rams

The Greatest Love

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the greatest love this world has known
is a love that can't be shown.
it is the love from our GOD above.
he created man and all that you see
gave us a heart and soul, and set us free.

unlike any other creatures of the earth
he gave us feelings and all its worth.
he put a universe above our heads
and the earth below our feet.
gave us fruits and plants that we may eat.

he gave us water so that we could live
and other animals so that they could give.
give us the nourishment that we need
so on this world we could feed.

this is the greatest love that he could give.
you could feel his powers, it filled the air
a sensation so great, it was beyond compare.

where ever he walked people followed
trying to fill their hearts, that were empty and hollow.
many walked like empty shells
while others walked with their
bodies, battered and broken
but with a love and faith in them
of which is still spoken.

his love for all mankind
will live throughout all time.

everything is possible if you BELIEVE
it is something that is daily seen.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 September 2009

the greatest love this world has known is a love that can't be shown. it is the love from our GOD above. he created man and all that you see gave us a heart and soul, and set us free. that is how we pay aure thanks to HIM.. so beautifully thmed poem....10 read mine... humble submission............o lord...prayer...

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Heather S 21 July 2009

this is a wonderful poem and answers so many questions about life

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Christine Kerr 18 July 2009

This one is great, Louis. It answers the question beautifully, 'Why Am I Here' or 'What's Life About' Questions, I believe we have all asked ourselves at one time or another. Love your, 'Hit Me Now Poems, ' 10+++

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~ Jon London ~ 18 July 2009

A world given to us all freely...to learn and share his love for one another....to feel the love between sisters and brothers, fathers and mothers.....this is the love that we do see.....nature and all it's beauty...given to us to feel.....this is his love.....but a love forever in heart....is a love we never see..............wonderful poem Louis 10++

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Kranthi Pothineni 18 July 2009

Well, the greatest love in this world is love that we can't see. Well said and composed.

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