The Greatest Poem by lady grace

The Greatest

Rating: 4.9


cheers to the eyes who sees me
for he can paint me on his mind

cheers to the lips who utter sweet words
for he is the best guardian ever

cheers to the toughest heart on earth
for I give my complete trust to him


he's at the distance
seems he's a star
from the earth i look even if how far
he's like a sun… i could not reach
satisfied by the brilliance that he give
daytime turns dark
moon doesn't shines
still waiting when he comes

for i want to trace his eyes looking at me
and see how he talks to me
hear his heartbeats even at once
to know this greatest man's charm......


(revised from my original name's entry)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C. P. Sharma 22 September 2009

The soft sweet sound of your jingling steps At distance unknown him rapturously wraps. CP

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Carol Gall 22 September 2009

lady i like this one better cheers to the poet 10

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Rafique Farooqi 22 September 2009

very fine poem helpful to stand the loneliness with confidence.............looking at the distant star..............or sun we grow our hopes

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Carl Harris 22 September 2009

This is a wonderfully expressed poem and a fine tribute to a man who has inspired you, Naizz. There are numerous beautifully phrased lines in this superb poem, which was a great pleasure to read. Carl.

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Fay Slimm 23 September 2009

Took my breath away - - - -10 + + + Fay

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I will join all the others and say Cheers to you My Lady Grace. Such heartfelt writing and written with style and grace. 10 love Karin

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Akram Awadat 30 September 2009

great work, well done it is fantastic lines

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Obinna Eruchie 29 September 2009

This is remarkable and dear from the heart.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 27 September 2009

excellently penned! cheers! 10+

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Indira Babbellapati 25 September 2009

it reads like a prayer to the divine almighty!

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