The Great Poem by TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .
The Great
IF LOVE IS A WEAKNESS,
IT IS WEAKNESS OF THE GREAT,
YOUR WORDSWERE THE KEY,
, MY MIND WASTHE GATE,
MY FEELINGS NEVER LIE,
MY HEART NEVER HATE,
WHEN NO ONE IS THERE,
IAM THE ONE WHO WILL WAIT,
YOUR JOY AND THE CHEAR,
THE SHARING AND THE CARE,
TO ME YOU CAN RELATE,
YOUR MIND AND THE SOUL,
TO ME CORRELATE,
THE LOVE AND THE HOPE,
WE ABLE TO CREATE,
LET US KEEP THE ROPE,
............................
IAM HERE NEVER LEAVE,
WAITING TILL THE DATE,
I WISH... YOU TO COME,
ON TIME AND NOT BE SO LATE,
THE KEYONLY YOURS,
DON'T CLOSE THE GATE,
MY HEART FULL OF LOVE,
MY HEART NEVER HATE...
YOUR WORDS WERE THE KEY , MY MIND WAS THE GATE, .............................. rain comes from cloudy winds grin reaches high from deep green sultry wind reasons to craving sweet words enlightens mind.........genesis of love gallantry of words, yet the mystery that reasons to reason love, as sweet word wields enormous strength and power to inflame desire, as force creates fire from stone, what a kind of rhythm that trembles the stillness, and that is the greatness of love yet unfathomed in the ages, yet ingeniously mellifluous, as sweet and gente words smooches heart and soul, yet luscious flow of powerful words in most lyrical style, yet of unique genre,10+++++, thanks for sharing
hmm a good poem from sweet poetry friend side... its soo romantic and done in a way that one can visualize it and I feel your subject and expressions you did in it..hope your comments will never stop nd a long note too..missing your words of course..best of luck dear friend
Love belongs to everyone and you leave the gate open for your love mans weakness for honey+++++10 regards
‘IF LOVE IS A WEAKNESS, // IT IS WEAKNESS OF THE GREAT, …’ Excellent take off…and this weakness is magnanimous… Strong TEN [goofed..by vote box LOL! ] by heart... Ms. Nivedita UK
'MY HEART FULL OF LOVE, MY HEART NEVER HATE' Well and lithe touch. Ten must be dr. sakti 13.08.09.
Nicely written, straight from the heart; creates a picture in the reader's mind. ++10
WISH... YOU TO COME, ON TIME AND NOT BE SO LATE, THE KEY ONLY YOURS, DON'T CLOSE THE GATE, MY HEART FULL OF LOVE, MY HEART NEVER HATE..., , , , , , , ya what an imagination from poetess heart. real reflection. i loved it from bottom of my heart....10
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love does not encourage hate.. good ione dear rate...10