The Great Exile Poem by ramesh rai
The Great Exile
I am out of my home town since 1996
Is it my exile in quest of bread
and survival of my family
why it happens so
Exile come once in every one's life
does it leave any lesson.
but my exile is greater
may it not be greater than the exile of Rama
but it is a greater exile
I wish an immediate end of this exile
Your nostalgic memories have motivated you to write a beautiful poem raising a question(Does it teach me a lesson?) innovative. No where I read a question like this. The poem has a diction with all kinds of words. From my limited knowledge of grammar, I don't find any faulty line. The subject of the poem is good. Cheers multilingual Ramesh Rai!
this exile happens to most of the common man in the present day world............the combination with an epic is also great..........
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/23/2024 5:34:59 AM # 1.0.0.1119
I feel your words in this poem, a great write.