Shene Smith


The Good In Uss - Poem by Shene Smith

I know how to get somewhere
but is it maybe everywhere
whenever my blood is pumping
the wispers begin and everyone can see she is lumping
sometimes i feel like just crying
and then i get hapiness i feel like like flying
life works in an weird combination
but somehow everyones gets satisfaction
one way or another life turns
and someone ends up getting burns

Topic(s) of this poem: sad, sadness


Poet's Notes about The Poem

writing stories but those i really love never know me

Comments about The Good In Uss by Shene Smith

  • Ratnakar Mandlik (6/11/2016 11:33:00 PM)

    Heartiest Congratulations for composing a poem with moods of life as also on it's selection as the member poem of the Day. (Report) Reply

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  • The Princess The Princess (6/11/2016 6:50:00 PM)

    First of all.....Harry Irene should be ashamed of himself. To write something critical is unacceptable especially realizing the age of the poet. Shene...your poem is beautiful and well expressed. Life is like that. It is unfair at times with it's ups and downs. Some people win and some will lose but if you are real to yourself, you will always be a winner inside! Congrats on being the poem of the day! (Report) Reply

  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (6/11/2016 3:16:00 PM)

    Life indeed has it's ups and downs- Rich in realism my friend. Congrats! (Report) Reply

  • Shene Smith Shene Smith (6/11/2016 2:44:00 PM)

    Harry irene i would please like to ask you not to juse Gods name for your cruelty when you say his name you are speaking to him ... you dont have to like my poem no one forced u to read it but scroll down and see that there is nice people around that leaves good remarks (Report) Reply

  • Harry Irene Harry Irene (6/11/2016 1:55:00 PM)

    Terrible grammar, spelling's rife with errors, jerky metre... how is this the poem of the day? Has this site lost all credibility? God's blood, this is awful! She is right to cry. (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga Rajnish Manga (6/11/2016 1:33:00 PM)

    sometimes i feel like just crying
    and then i get happiness i feel like flying..../ This is symbolic of the ups and downs of our life. Very well written. Thanks and Congrats on your selection for the day (June 11,2016) (Report) Reply

  • Subhas Chandra Chakra Subhas Chandra Chakra (6/11/2016 12:37:00 PM)

    whenever my blood is pumping
    the wispers begin and everyone can see she is lumping
    sometimes i feel like just crying
    and then i get hapiness i feel like like flying
    life works in an weird combination
    A poem filled with great hope to go ahead amidst desperate situations.
    ice poem. Thanks For it.10 marks.
    Subhas (Report) Reply

  • Soul Watcher Soul Watcher (6/11/2016 6:40:00 AM)

    Congratulations to be Poet of the day (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis Edward Kofi Louis (6/11/2016 3:14:00 AM)

    I feel just like crying! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report) Reply

  • Dr.tony Brahmin Dr.tony Brahmin (5/14/2016 4:40:00 AM)

    somehow everyones gets satisfaction
    one way or another life turns
    and someone ends up getting burns... struggles, pains, burns. and finally with the hope somehow we are going to win........... very nice poem.... let the good in us win always. tony (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, May 14, 2016

Poem Edited: Friday, June 10, 2016


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