The Good In Uss Poem by Shene Smith

The Good In Uss

Rating: 3.8


I know how to get somewhere
but is it maybe everywhere
whenever my blood is pumping
the wispers begin and everyone can see she is lumping
sometimes i feel like just crying
and then i get hapiness i feel like like flying
life works in an weird combination
but somehow everyones gets satisfaction
one way or another life turns
and someone ends up getting burns

Saturday, May 14, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: sad,sadness
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
writing stories but those i really love never know me
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 14 May 2016

somehow everyones gets satisfaction one way or another life turns and someone ends up getting burns... struggles, pains, burns. and finally with the hope somehow we are going to win........... very nice poem.... let the good in us win always. tony

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Edward Kofi Louis 11 June 2016

I feel just like crying! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Soul Watcher 11 June 2016

Congratulations to be Poet of the day

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 11 June 2016

whenever my blood is pumping the wispers begin and everyone can see she is lumping sometimes i feel like just crying and then i get hapiness i feel like like flying life works in an weird combination A poem filled with great hope to go ahead amidst desperate situations. ice poem. Thanks For it.10 marks. Subhas

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Ratnakar Mandlik 11 June 2016

Heartiest Congratulations for composing a poem with moods of life as also on it's selection as the member poem of the Day.

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Life indeed has it's ups and downs- Rich in realism my friend. Congrats!

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Shene Smith 11 June 2016

Harry irene i would please like to ask you not to juse Gods name for your cruelty when you say his name you are speaking to him ... you dont have to like my poem no one forced u to read it but scroll down and see that there is nice people around that leaves good remarks

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Harry Irene 11 June 2016

Terrible grammar, spelling's rife with errors, jerky metre... how is this the poem of the day? Has this site lost all credibility? God's blood, this is awful! She is right to cry.

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Rajnish Manga 11 June 2016

sometimes i feel like just crying and then i get happiness i feel like flying..../ This is symbolic of the ups and downs of our life. Very well written. Thanks and Congrats on your selection for the day (June 11,2016)

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