The Gloomy Moon Poem by ramesh rai

The Gloomy Moon

Rating: 5.0


The moon is gloomy
due to loneliness
so trying to hide
within the cloud

The moon is gloomy
due to black spot
so trying to hide
within the cloud

The cloud is also clever
always repelling
this makes a fun
the screaming stars

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 25 July 2013

woman and men love pusuits came to my mind

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 25 July 2013

woman and men love pusuits came to my mind

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 26 July 2013

The cloud is also clever always repelling this makes a fun the screaming stars wonderful hide-n-seek imagery! 10/10 for this great write.

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David Wood 26 July 2013

Men seeking love comes to mind here Ramesh. A good poem

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 26 July 2013

A unique fascinatin twist poem on d moon. I admire d moon much.

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 25 July 2013

woman and men love pusuits came to my mind

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 25 July 2013

woman and men love pusuits came to my mind

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