The Glass Poem by sallam yassin

The Glass



Had you even have a glass?
Have you even broke a glass?
Hundred of glass
Every where
Hand; and no a glass
No way to repair the glass
And the harm of glass is every where
Hand; and the glass
Hold the glass
Handle with care the GLASS

Tuesday, July 9, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: heart
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Beauty is fragile
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Yasmin Khan 09 July 2013

Glass may taken as symbol for feelings, hearts and ego, a good poem but I feel syntax needs to be reviewed.

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sallam yassin

sallam yassin

Hargeisa, Somaliland
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