The Garden Poem by Jesus Diaz Llorico

The Garden

Rating: 4.5


'In this garden I take a rest
To ease the sorrow in my chest
For I have seen so many years
Before I felt this flowing tears
The rains won't fall, the clouds are gone
The winds and trees knew it is done
And in this garden where I lie
I let the sky gently pass me by'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Queeny Gona 09 October 2013

Pain of departure is expressed in a beautiful manner dear poet pal.....

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Heather Wilkins 05 October 2013

a beautiful poem written about a departed soul at rest at last. good ink

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Jesus Diaz Llorico 02 October 2013

Thank you Sandy for a well defined comment. Really appreciate this a lot.

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Geetima Baruah Sarma 01 October 2013

Sweet and simple verse, nicely rhymed!

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Abhishek Mishra 28 September 2013

Simple and beautiful...a very nice poem: -)

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