The Freedom To Feel Poem by LADY SHY

The Freedom To Feel

There's nothing holding me back

No one can stop me

This is my chance

To express my feelings and let them be

Step aside jack

There's a bomb of emotions that has enhanced

It kept building and building

Until it could no longer last

The ability to release

All of the pain I feel

Letting my pride decrease

Giving me the opportunity to be real

No longer bottled up

Refusing to be locked in

Breaking the chains

That were from within

Chains that couldn't last

Overwhelmed by the power of defeating the past

Having the power to speak freely

Without ANYONE trying to keep me from doing so

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adeline Foster 25 March 2014

The theme is consistent in this one, but, why the double- spacing? It makes it hard to read and destroys the consistency. Otherwise a good poem. Read mine - Bloom of Youth - Adeline

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