The Force Which Kills You Poem by Abdul Wahab

The Force Which Kills You

Rating: 5.0


who wants to be bad?
you? me?

perhaps none
yet you do it
me, too

what force us?
Can’t we force it out?

before that
you need to search

before searching
you need to be conscious
of your unconscious
trove
where you keep
secretly
valueless
like precious gold

And more,
you keep continue
to say that you do not want to tell lies
yet you tell,
me, too

Though it has spoken value
what cherished value
does it carry?

Nothing!
Yet you keep it

as if, you are
Under black magic

as if, it lights something
and you burn,
burn like fire

yet you keep continue
the valueless
like invaluable

and you never know
when you become unhappy

to become one
you burn a desire

and start to live in future
that’s the FORCE which kills you…………….

KILL IT before it kills
and replace it with longing..

if you able to do that
and you are a man

a man with difference
with different receptivity..a higher sense of life

and you see a bubble,
a bubble of happiness around you bubbling..

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
the desire is the force which kills you, replace it with ''longing '' it is quite different from desire
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aftab Alam Khursheed 24 May 2013

you know bhai this is a nice one Kill your anger before it kills you

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Gajanan Mishra 24 May 2013

kill it before it kills a bubble of happiness bubbling around Great write, really, my dear poet, congratulation. It is my favorite one -10

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