The Flow Of Snow Poem by Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Nuadihi, Khuntagaon, Bonai, Dist-Sundargarh, Odisha, INDIA

The Flow Of Snow

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When the temperature is low,
Winter smiles with sun's glow.
Row of drops of water does flow,
Snow is called this you all know.

Snow fills the lap of mountains,
It shows the dazzling fountains
Shine flakes write consonants,
Vowels come from flying gnats.

Rats dig holes below keep grain,
Rain of water flakes watches train.
Pain goes away, smiles the winter,
On road it falls down, shiny splinter.

Timber forms layer on road clumsy,
This again looks like thread fuzzy.
Busy street people watch its flying,
Children get success on several trying.

Snowfall becomes beauty treasure,
All people of course get life pleasure.
Writing the glory of God snow does fall,
Fragrance spreads far a flower of small.

By command of time snow does flow,
In wonderful creation magic does show.
God is great fills nature ever we know,
By his grace seasons do come with glow.

Sunday, February 1, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: snow
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
"When low temperature is observed in weather with sun's shining winter smile. At that time snow falls. We observe row of drop of waters. With freezing this is called snowfall. About this all of you know. It fills the lap of mountains. Dazzling fountains it shows. Flakes shine and write consonants. From flying fly vowels come out as they sing. Below the surface of snow rats dig hole and keep grains for them. Rain of water flakes watches train means these also fall on train travelling. By watching such a scene pain goes away and winter smiles always. Splinter with shiny nature falls down on road. On clumsy road timber forms the layer. This looks like just a texture of appearance which is difficult to perceive due to deep snow. In busy street also people watch its flying. On several trying also children get success in watching. Snowfall is a treasure of beauty definitely. All people get pleasure in life of course. Snow falls writing the glory of God. A small flower also spreads fragrance up to far distance. Snow flows by command of time. It shows magic in wonderful creation. God is great always and ever fills nature in resources. Seasons come with glow here by his grace only." This poem is based on such theme. This is written in Odisha, India and dedicated to the people of the world.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lyn Paul 02 February 2015

Your Flow of Snow has covered warmth and beauty. Thank you too for your Poet notes.

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Clarence Prince 02 February 2015

Oh what a nice poem this is, especially the two last lines! Well done, Bhargabi!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 02 February 2015

Snowfall becomes beauty treasure In cold places where snow falls, it is a treasure. It keeps the ground wet in summer for plants to grow. Excess snow turns into a storm bringing life to standstill. Thank you for sharing a beautiful poem.

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Susan Lacovara 06 February 2015

I am blanketed in the frozen New York winter...but your poem has made me see the beauty, again, it the landscaped picturesque perfection of snow. Quite beautiful it is, as is your write. PEACE

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Geetha Jayakumar 05 February 2015

A Beautiful poem. Very true said, God's creations are wonderful, By command of time snow does flow. Beautiful flow of words, cool and pleasant to read. Loved reading it.

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 February 2015

Great work! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

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Ramesh Rai 03 February 2015

Beautiful flow of ink and soothing write. Very cool and calm specifying beauty of nature.

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Ramesh Rai 03 February 2015

Beautiful flow of ink and soothing write. Very cool and calm specifying beauty of nature.

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Nuadihi, Khuntagaon, Bonai, Dist-Sundargarh, Odisha, INDIA
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