The Five Jewels Poem by Rekha Mandagere

The Five Jewels

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The Five precious jewels on Silvern moon
Greeted me to give great boon
And it is my fortune to watch them soon
When P prominently stood polite
E elegantly looked elite
A astonishingly held to its austerity
C contemplatively engaged in creativity
E earnestly pleaded for excellency
The friend of polite, elite, austere,
More creative and excellent is PEACE
And it ensures everyone, live in solace
Puts an end to every menace
And a great bliss to love beauty in silence
By checking man from wild violence
But let it not break into piece
This must become the edifice
On which we will build our enterprise!

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Elena Sandu 30 April 2012

Lovely written dearest Rekha! To stop the path of violence is the people dream. My efforts, too small I don't think that counts. But if we do unite no power can stop all the warmth of hearts.Thank you! ! Love and smiles, Elena

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Chandra Thiagarajan 01 December 2012

The poem full of meaning is endearing.Very well written with excellent rhyme! Thanks.

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Hans Vr 12 May 2012

NIce inspiring poem. Very well written.

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Joseph Anderson 04 May 2012

And uplifting and eleghantly rendered poem about this whole world's most pressing problem. A bravo to you

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Ramesh Rai 02 May 2012

a nice explanation of peace. flow of this poem is also nice.the foundation of peace, lovely

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Malini Kadir 02 May 2012

I love the way you have started the poetry...The Five precious jewels on Silvern moon Greeted me to give great boon

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