The First Dream Poem by Billy Collins

The First Dream

Rating: 4.8


The Wind is ghosting around the house tonight
and as I lean against the door of sleep
I begin to think about the first person to dream,
how quiet he must have seemed the next morning

as the others stood around the fire
draped in the skins of animals
talking to each other only in vowels,
for this was long before the invention of consonants.

He might have gone off by himself to sit
on a rock and look into the mist of a lake
as he tried to tell himself what had happened,
how he had gone somewhere without going,

how he had put his arms around the neck
of a beast that the others could touch
only after they had killed it with stones,
how he felt its breath on his bare neck.

Then again, the first dream could have come
to a woman, though she would behave,
I suppose, much the same way,
moving off by herself to be alone near water,

except that the curve of her young shoulders
and the tilt of her downcast head
would make her appear to be terribly alone,
and if you were there to notice this,

you might have gone down as the first person
to ever fall in love with the sadness of another.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Pedulla 15 December 2017

Again, the foray into the hypothetical! Again, not a display of the human condition as we know it, but a cute little hypothetical: I wonder where fish go when they die? Do they go to a heaven of air? or do they swim in celestial pools- Blah, blah, blah. Keep your feet firmly rooted in the soil and tell us what human life is, Billy. Tell us what it is! ! ! Stop being so damned simplistic.

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David L. Duran 15 June 2008

'...to ever fall in love with the sadness of another.' ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL WRITING.

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Theresa Daly 28 April 2005

the genius of billy collins graces poemhunter!

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Joseph Pedulla 15 December 2017

Billy Collins has done more to harm poetry than anyone in recent memory.

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