The Firing Avalance Poem by Catrina Heart

The Firing Avalance

Rating: 3.1


couldn't conquer I
perhaps
eyes were set to fire
iron heart revitalized
to breathe again
after
the firing avalanche



11th of December,2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kranthi Pothineni 11 December 2009

Very nicely composed short poem. Lovely.

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Dinesh Mukherji 11 December 2009

fantastic catrina, an avalanche fired and perfect write.

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Carol Gall 11 December 2009

short but really good 10

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Eyan Desir 11 December 2009

You show full control over your work..... You're great....

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Ramesh T A 11 December 2009

Rage of human enmity excels even fire and iron strength sometimes!

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