The Fire Poem by Flame6203E ...

The Fire

Rating: 5.0


the fire,
i love it,
the way it dances,
out of control leaping,
into the air it's,
so beautiful,
the way it dances,
the way the sparks,
fly up high and,
the flame shows me,
the past,
the future,
and what might have been,
the cracking of a,
new twig in the fire,
the jumping,
the dancing,
the leaping,
the uncontrollable flame,
when it dies,
so does my spirit.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Annie Girl 21 May 2008

beautiful poem i love it the way you talk about fire is amazing keep up the good work :)

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Frank Cannon 18 January 2008

Keep piling those logs onto the fire of your imagination..... Burn Baby Burn.......

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Hali Curtis 05 October 2007

I luv fire oh wat is that one word piero i believe its spelled right! but thats wat i am

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Red Blooded Black Hearted 11 September 2007

It has passion and kept me at the edge of my seet. I like it.

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jazmine kristen 10 September 2007

aww this is sweet in a way I like it but wat could of been? ?

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