The Feeling Poem by hazel jackson

The Feeling

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have you ever had the feeling deep down inside you cant really hide it the feeling wanting to go some place small some place long and scream just relieve your self and when you cant get there you just to feel a ball up inside your stomach and you panic and it gets worse then you want to leave and cant you want it to stop but it wont this is the feeling that i get when im someplace with people i may or might want or like its near all i do is panic i pray and it comes down a little thank god you try taking breaths hold it in then let go doesnt help but your habbit in as in what you like to do will help

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Dr Antony Theodore 10 October 2018

all i do is panic i pray and it comes down a little thank god you try taking breaths hold it in then let go doesnt help but your habbit in as in what you like to do will help......expressions of the inexpressible........... this was my reaction as i read your poem many times very carefully...... write my dear poetess. writing leads to Catharsis........ an inner purification........ tony

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