Mary Forrester

The Fear - Poem by Mary Forrester

From the corner of my eye
And the stillness of the evening
I saw a reflection
Of something really evil
My heart began to race
As I took up the pace
I stumbled over slabs and stones
Then fell upon my face
The blood began to poor
As I lay upon the floor
Screaming God help me
I heard the pitter patter
Saw the furry matter
Closely followed by teeth and claws
Frozen from the fear
I watched him scamper clear
And thanked The Lord that I'm still here

Poet's Notes about The Poem

This poem is a parody of people's reaction to mice.

Comments about The Fear by Mary Forrester

  • Gold Star - 12,202 Points Khairul Ahsan (6/6/2014 10:54:00 AM)

    Enjoyed the poem. Thanks for the note.
    The fear and its effects have been well depicted. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 480 Points John Brown (9/11/2013 12:55:00 PM)

    Almost a horror story this. It's big fat spiders that scare me. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,120 Points Heather Wilkins (9/1/2013 2:56:00 PM)

    fear not GOD is always near. lovely wrte (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 1, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, September 3, 2013

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