The Fantasy Tree Poem by Y Sunita Devi

The Fantasy Tree

Rating: 5.0


Dangling by its sides,
The twigs and leaves,
Keep dancing to and fro
Making the tree swing in air.


Its beautiful bends and curve,
Smiling all the while dangling,
With its branches,
Always busy accommodating the birds.


The most beautiful tree,
With its trunk coming out,
To make a chair for every,
Naughty child to sit in respite.



The very fantasy tree,
Which is every child’s,
Most fantasy desire and dream,
To sit on its chair for a while.


31/01/09

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

This reminds me of Enid Blyton's book The Magic Faraway Tree, which I used to sit in a tree and read. This poem has a lovely swing to it and lots of imagery to savor. 10 love Karin

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Sebastine Humaemo 02 February 2009

ahhhh too lovely......Natures beauty is been described in your lines in a soothing way.......the fourth n fifth para makes one to think for a while....lines which speaks abt fantasy tree is every child's desire and dream..........hmmm no words to describe t.........full credits fr this work.........10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ sebastine....

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