The Fantasy Land Poem by Freespirit Juneja
The Fantasy Land
The Fantasy Land
Sweeping away all the griefs
Turning everyone as heart's thief
Learning ways to dampen the cries
Tying tongues telling the lies
Crossing hills and desert sands
I'm flying towards the fantasy land
Far away from life's gyre
Where love is soul of zephyr
Where only happiness flows
No animosity and no more foes
Simple life becomes so grand
Yes, I have landed in the fantasy land
World here is a benevolent ocean
Everything is in Brownian motion
Freespirits are the sole residents
Everyone is his own president
All compile a beautiful band
Yes, I'm living in the fantasy land
No brutality and no hidden lies
Honesty and truth here drives
Heart sings here merry songs
Even sinners dupe their wrongs
Everyone joins hand to hand
It's the beauty of the fantasy land
Freespirit Juneja
Again, a nice poem - I think the second line of the second verse needs looking at, and I don`t know what `brownian motion` is. Otherwise, very good.
if only this fantasy land becomes real....i am dreaming...so nice it should be
Freespirits are the sole residents Everyone is his own president! ! a poem which longs to wish seeing a pure world! ! this song is wonderful;
wow! yours poem is really nice and the poetic lines and rhyme scheme is also great
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/19/2024 4:11:43 PM # 1.0.0.1119
I like the theme of this place you have created, humans living in harmony, well concieved and thought out. I have to agree with Valerie about the second verse. Good writing......