Freespirit Juneja

Rookie - 3 Points (09 Aug 1983 / New Delhi)

The Fantasy Land Poem by Freespirit Juneja


The Fantasy Land

Sweeping away all the griefs
Turning everyone as heart's thief
Learning ways to dampen the cries
Tying tongues telling the lies
Crossing hills and desert sands
I'm flying towards the fantasy land

Far away from life's gyre
Where love is soul of zephyr
Where only happiness flows
No animosity and no more foes
Simple life becomes so grand
Yes, I have landed in the fantasy land

World here is a benevolent ocean
Everything is in Brownian motion
Freespirits are the sole residents
Everyone is his own president
All compile a beautiful band
Yes, I'm living in the fantasy land

No brutality and no hidden lies
Honesty and truth here drives
Heart sings here merry songs
Even sinners dupe their wrongs
Everyone joins hand to hand
It's the beauty of the fantasy land

Freespirit Juneja

Submitted: Saturday, March 10, 2012
Edited: Tuesday, February 24, 2015

Topic of this poem: Unity


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It's about a dream of every individual who wants the world to be a heaven.

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  • Rookie - 15 Points Swetha Vanakayalapati (6/21/2012 9:47:00 AM)

    Freespirits are the sole residents
    Everyone is his own president! !

    a poem which longs to wish seeing a pure world! ! this song is wonderful; (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 600 Points Louis Borgo (5/26/2012 7:44:00 PM)

    you connection with the read love the stanza and the line Tying tongues telling the lies keep written 10! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ankita Verma (4/25/2012 12:56:00 PM)

    wow! yours poem is really nice and the poetic lines and rhyme scheme is also great (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Dhivya Thiyagarajan (4/24/2012 7:32:00 AM)

    really it is a nice poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jyo Jottypoet (4/23/2012 9:11:00 PM)

    Magical Fantasy: -) Very well written Freespirit Juneja (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points Shikha Shah (4/22/2012 11:28:00 AM)

    so thoughtful! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 50 Points Nivedita Dutta (4/17/2012 11:48:00 PM)

    a good poem.... wonderfully composed! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points G.R. Gaus (4/16/2012 5:06:00 PM)

    I like the theme of this place you have created, humans living in harmony, well concieved and thought out. I have to agree with Valerie about the second verse. Good writing...... (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,193 Points Valerie Dohren (4/15/2012 6:16:00 AM)

    Again, a nice poem - I think the second line of the second verse needs looking at, and I don`t know what `brownian motion` is. Otherwise, very good. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,652 Points Dave Walker (4/14/2012 11:43:00 AM)

    A really wonderful poem, like it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Blossom Mist (4/14/2012 8:48:00 AM)

    I would love to be in fantasy land...beautiful world described marvelously.... :) (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 710 Points Shahzia Batool (4/14/2012 6:00:00 AM)

    A visit to Utopia!
    a true and positive poet's imagination does not need a passport-visa things for such a visit, and he does not visit alone, but by the technique of impressionism carries us along too...in the world of the fever n the fret, it's a happy release though...the poem says aloud let's don't think about the dream-break.... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,521 Points Neela Nath (4/14/2012 3:19:00 AM)

    Every tormented soul would like to visit that very land.A Utopia! Fantastic job with strong power of imagination! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,092 Points Unwritten Soul (4/8/2012 3:06:00 AM)

    Is it a land on earth? it must be great place to visit, i wanna try brownian movement...hahaha joking,
    i wonder if the sky is not blue but different hue...and the tree can talk to bird and we see it around the house,
    fantasy land a new land to discover but that is only a land that placed in your mind...Bring it out here just a as a written one but give our mind a ticket to visit sometime :) keep writing! _Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Anubhuti Modi (4/7/2012 7:09:00 AM)

    i want to be inthe fantasy land........................... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Louis Cecile (4/7/2012 3:29:00 AM)

    A very nice feel good factor to this piece that flows with good rhythm to maintain the sentiment of the poem. Good work (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 30 Points Sreejith Kulaparambil (4/6/2012 2:23:00 PM)

    good one dear..! ! keep it up (Report) Reply

  • Rookie David Gerardino (4/6/2012 2:20:00 PM)

    happens only in fantasy land, , , , , , , , , , , i can see the words, , , , , , , , , , very good. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 34 Points Vijay Sai R (4/3/2012 6:59:00 AM)

    if only this fantasy land becomes real....i am dreaming...so nice it should be (Report) Reply

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