The Fallen Tears Poem by Maya Hershey

I like the last stanza: ''Oh, how salty my tears are, don't be shy to leave a scar, I'll wait, don't care if forever, farewell my fallen tears, we lie together... '' well written sad lyric poem.....touching..........10+++

I voted 10 nice write keep them coming

so pathetic piece though its melancholic traits overcome its pessimistic ones, one collapses in floods of tears whilst reading, written sedately and eloquently.

wow so great poem with sweet and rich idea..the composition of your poem is very good heart feeling..and i found some how innovation in your ideas..specially in this poem..you are a good poet and hope you never stop writing..I am basically a peace wisher poet with 6 books and your comments will be added to my new book sure... respect your words and kindness being a good poetry friend.. you are a good poet..and I mean it that you are..10+++

hornestly every time i read any of your poems i just cant believe how nice they sound to me. they sound like one of those poems written by one of those great poets from long ago, the kind we have to study in school today. you are sooo talented. pls dont stop writting