The Fall Poem by Shahzia Batool

The Fall

Rating: 3.8


Under the indescribable skies
standing,
wondering at the incomplete accounts
of the untold stories
the flow will stay at birth,
the grip on the thoughts is lost somewhere;
standing,
panting,
stumbling upon the unbelievable earth
the words die a pre-natal death,
and the case of not very easy breaths,
the tales of the suffering souls
of every description
and definition,
the ones who are everything which i am not;
little reflection, and the fall everywhere;
the undone rimes on a rose-petal,
the unsung songs for the rain birds
locked up in a blood clot or clots
somewhere inside the suspended stream,
what is there is a sense of loss
for the pen uncapped,
and the dried ink,
and the page left all blank...

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Haven't I painted my own void on the white canvas? ...

The Fall
Monday, February 29, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: fall
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abduhoo Salamath 15 August 2016

very heart touching poem...keep writing....

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Unwritten Soul 10 June 2016

Very flowy poem...nice one Shahzia

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Akhtar Jawad 07 June 2016

A nice Free Verse, thoughtful and touching.

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Wahab Abdul 29 February 2016

given you 6/10 and use no words to describe the quality of the poem.

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