The Eternal Mind Poem by The Black Rose

The Eternal Mind



Whispers of the eternal mind,
Seeping through a midsummers night,
lost inside yourself,
nothing to turn to,
no hope,
no light,
no death in dark dreams,
Just you and your neverending plight

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Georgios Venetopoulos 30 January 2013

You write philosophical free verse. The element of despair is widely spread in your verses, which through their aural content, appear elegant and Gothic. You should continue writing.

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