The Enemy By Your Side... Poem by Annette Aitken

The Enemy By Your Side...

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The Enemy By Your Side.

He may not dress in camouflage
or wear a metal hat
the carrying of a gun
that's not his style, is that.
it doesn't mean to say, he's not,
your enemy number one
his choice of weapon is not a gun
but, the ball point pen he loves.
The words he prints can cut you deep
as if a blade had swept across your feet.
Though others may not see his type.
This sad and lonely chap is weak.
The neon signs are screaming out
beware the enemy, the scheming lout
for he will gladly spread his lies
then sit there smirking
with little, pride.
Some may think that ink can't hurt
but, when used just right and
the bubble bursts
the poison ink that he emit
could come back with a bigger hit.
Beware the open can of worms
for once escaped there's no return
So best ignore, this ink blot stain,
don't give rise to him again.

'yes with delight'.

by

A.A.....

Wednesday, February 22, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: wake up call
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
saddo manipulating, breaking control, winning.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Laurie Van Der Hart 26 March 2017

Good writing, Annette! The poison pen can be lethal.

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 February 2017

With delight. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Seamus O Brian 24 February 2017

How very true. And so well executed. I think this should be poem of the day as a warning that owning a keyboard and a nametag that reads Poet is not a license to infect the cosmos with poison. Nicely done.

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Tom Billsborough 22 February 2017

Well, it's a lot better than my effort on the same subject! very sharp, funny and with a wise ending! very apt for the stink with the ink!

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