The Eggspectations Poem by ONElia AVElar

The Eggspectations

Rating: 3.6


(Female European Cuckoos lay their eggs only in the nests of other species of birds. A cuckoo egg usually closely mimics the eggs of the host)


In my nest
I kept the eggs
of hopes and dreams,
close to my chest
and tended them all
blessed blind in patience
and long eggspectations!
Before their hatch
how could I know,
alas, I’ve sat upon
a few cuckoos’ eggs,
fulfilled the dreams
not mine, the hopes
of someone else.

Sofia, the 15.07.2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

How utterly, flowingly, bittersweetly heartwrenching. t x

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Original Unknown Girl 15 July 2008

Wow Onelia, wonderful concept of cuckoo eggs and unrealised dreams. Your imagery and metaphors are right on target! Superb... HG: -) xx

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Kesav Easwaran 15 July 2008

hopes and dreams are part of expectations...and love and care natural follw up...eggs would certailny hatch out to...cuckoo's yours or crow's 10

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Flora Gillingham 15 July 2008

Delicious! Check all the eggs - I'm sure that some will be your own. Fx

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Bitter poem written about a wound. Its picture is 'The Calumny of Apelles' (La Calunnia di Apelle') by Sandro Botticelli, now in the Uffizi.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 12 October 2008

A beautiful short poem with nice imagery. 10 for it.

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Mark Nwagwu 26 September 2008

I smiled and smiled as I read this. It goes so well, Onelia, with your comment that your life us under permanent construction so you don't have time to write your memoir. You must be really real. Don't worry, your eggspectations will hatch under the warmth of your summer soul.

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Janice Windle 31 August 2008

I recognise a common problem! Great analogy, Onelia x Jan

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Marvin Brato 21 August 2008

Sometimes in life, one becomes more effective in helping others fulfill their goals other than his; in this way he is also being benefited indirectly! High marks.

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Coach Roth 27 July 2008

Wonderful...metaphorically speaking and all else...Coach

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