The Earth Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

The Earth

Rating: 5.0


Million stars million planets
Live in your eyes
Imagine
Move your eyelashes
Change the rules
Still
One butterfly
One life
On the earth
Survive

(2008/6/10)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M M 10 June 2008

A lovely poem, here, built on the traditional poetical idea of eyes leading the world, or world turning round thanks to one's eyes. Very nice!

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Delilah Miller 10 June 2008

Simple, beatiful and put together so lovingly X's and O's

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Chitra - 03 September 2008

a nice concept shared with through your eyes!

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Tsira Goge 10 June 2008

Eyes - the Same window of the soul, excellently expressed feeling, Nightingale ...10 Tsira

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Thad Wilk 10 June 2008

A million stars and planets in her eyes you see, you've found a love, that was meant to be Great read Shiraz! ! Best wishes, Friend Thad *10*! !

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... ... 10 June 2008

I'm fascinated by this one. Nice job!

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Lynda Robson 10 June 2008

Another lovely piece, interesting concept, thanks for sharing,10 Lynda xx

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