The Drive Home Poem by Stefan nnn

The Drive Home

Rating: 5.0


The evening draws to a close
Excuses are made and we
- say our goodbyes

On the drive home
you sleepily tell
- me you love me

I smile, soft, bemused
ask 'why? ', not
- that you say

But why, after all these years
why do you
- still love me?

I cannot think of reasons anymore
perhaps because
- it is so late

Though perhaps also it's
that we no longer
- need reasons

When we were strangers still
we did, as love was
- spiced with fear

But do we now? I ask, and turn
to see your reply
- but you are sleeping
- head on seatbelt.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Zoe Nyght 04 June 2005

Stefan Nesbitt, I'm glad I've found you here. This is great stuff. Perfectly relatable, you've turned my thoughts into poetry. (Interesting format, too.)

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John Tiong Chunghoo 04 June 2005

witty stuff! i love this.

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Suitcase Girl 03 June 2005

*I* love you because you drive me around in an Aston Martin, passing the most beautiful olive farms and vineyards :)

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