The Divine Unknown Wisdom Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

The Divine Unknown Wisdom

Rating: 4.7


The child clung to his mother's breast
Warm motherly affection for her guest

She was fighting to her last breath
The divine unknown wisdom
Maternal death

(2009/2/9)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

A poem that is as short as this can make a huge impact on the reader as this as done to me. That is what poetry is all about..and you have done it very well. Karin Anderson

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Fay Slimm 09 February 2009

One of the most moving of short pieces and getting straight into the heart of any mother - - - thank you.... Fay.

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Estrella Baldemosa 09 February 2009

wow! i just made a poem about a son and mother relationship but in a different light. read my poem ' on free love'

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Allan Macli Borges 09 February 2009

a poem with taking words, well penned straight to deep feelings. death is always a way to unknown. great poem indeed.

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Reihaneh Jalalian 09 February 2009

good job. it was beautiful. thanks so much for sharing this wonderful poem 10 from me

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sky dreams 28 July 2009

powerful write.. happens all to often, both emotionally and physically..10+

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Tess Bybee 12 February 2009

I like this, it's well expressed in a few words. Good job.

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Anjali Sinha 10 February 2009

powerful poem i can feel that 'maternal death' -10 anjali

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Miriam Maia Padua 10 February 2009

very touching write, compassionate and loving....meaningful the great bonding between a mother and her child.... the unknown divine wisdom.... the sad parting.....which only their heart's and soul know.... 10+++

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Seema Chowdhury 09 February 2009

i could feel your passion and strong feelings behind these lines. well done.

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