The Dead Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

The Dead

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The Dead: and there voices here
all around me;
Rushing towards death,
after a few go bye and what is another.
Some mothers son, some fathers daughter
the bullet is fast, it leaves all relaxed
like death at the spa, while your sphincter
does it's last duty better, than I ever could.
It drinks as it slaughters and laughs
it's laugh, right there where it hurts
there between your eyes
right below where you breath
and up above
the last bright yellow sun spot
that you saw.
So fields of sunflowers happy and mellow
I see them all
each do I see, when I pass them all
as I walk and they fall row after row
like wheat on the field come the fall..
There is beauty in all that I see,
knowing in my hand Is my why that I held
your face and it's mine it was yours.
Let it come then quickly
and make me no example too die like that
on some far away spot a pin pricked dot.
Rushing towards death
am I with; The Dead.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tai Chi Italy 18 October 2009

Some amazing imagery here! These lines caught my imagination by the throat! lol while your sphincter does it's last duty better than I ever could. It drinks as it slaughters and laughs There is so much in this poem to both admire and fear, but Tai is no scaredy cat and can take any mushing you offer up. Keep writing my dear poet. Fear has a way of waking the Dead within us! All is perceived in the meadow of our minds eye. Drenched in fear when our lives become unclear! But don't worry, it is just fear and will disappear as time will tell another story. smiling at you Tai, submitting to the dark side of my moon!

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James McLain

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