There are days when I look into your eyes
That had tears rolling inside of mines
I can’t help but to feel so insecure
Fearing my biggest fear
Afraid if I give you all my heart
That one day you’ll just tear it apart
There are days when im with you
Where your eyes wonder around
Is it someone in our surrounding?
I want to know how you feel
Cause sometimes I don’t know if what you’re feeling is real
How can you tell me to not fall in love to fast?
Cause that maybe one day were not going to last
Then way are you always telling me forever and ever
When what you’re really felling is ______________
So I don’t know if you really like me
And if the things you say is true or lies
I couldn’t help to think all this
The day you made me cry.
It sure does make you think. Style was good, words were great..id give it a 10. Nice piece
This poem hit home. It made me cry the 1st time I read it. It's like you looked into my heart and wrote down what you saw, this is how I feel with my bf (well ex bf now) He has such a hard time telling me how he felt about me, he broke up with me the 20th...he said he wasn't ready for a serious relationship....ne ways great poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! XOXO, Kolee
every poem that i have read yjou wirte so far some how gets to me..... you are a gerat writer.... keep it up... i wish you were to go on keep writing aobut love like you do.... your poems fit the soul so well.... -Xanadu-
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
i feel like you read my thoughts, and wrote them down. i feel like this about my boyfriend sometimes but i dont know how to tell him that he makes me feel like that he has a hard time expressing how he feels sometimes to, he'd rather put in a text messege lol anyway good job