The Day Passes By…………… Poem by Jinal Oswal

The Day Passes By……………

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The day passes by like that of a flower’s smell,
The sky is covered with clouds like forming a dark colored blanket.

I wait in the balcony, for the wind to whisper in my ears,
I wait for the emptiness to wither in the night and not come for years.

I wait for the warm healing touch of my love,
I wait for the hug which would bid goodbye to all my fears.

I long to see the smile that got faded in the rain,
I wish for you, with every dropp of rain.



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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eric Cockrell 16 September 2011

filled with longing... powerful!

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Allemagne Roßmann 30 August 2011

Tomorrow and tomorrow creeps in petty pace to the last syllable of recorded time... so let bygones be bygones let it leave u a sweet memoir just a memoir nothing more as thought Thoughts always bring tears and people who would not understand it surrounding you, your fears will usher in all sorts of jeers So better stave urself off this arrear

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Unwritten Soul 18 August 2011

The time will comes and you will fun, when it rain you will start to dance, a blessing time The one will come and save your life run, when loves drain and you will dancing as bright flame...nice work Jinal and i guess your are waiting a beautiful time before exploding to create greater poetry soon :) _Unwritten SOul

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