The Darkness Poem by Craig Mize
The Darkness
To be trapped in the Darkness
It seems like light fails to enter into the opens
Not even through the cracks of my walls do it peek through
I'm now lost in a ball of confusion
Not known where I am nor where I want to be
I'm steady staring into the pit of darkness
Hoping to be able to see some kind of light peek through
I was once told that if you have faith anything is possible
But on that cold rainy night in september
All possiblities slowly faded away from me
Now it feels like the whole world is crashing down on me
I don't have no way to protect myself there is nowhere to hide
I now know what I am, I am trapped in the darkness
I love the way there a breaks in the poem and lack of quotation marks.. gives the poem a more ominous feel!
my gosh this is a poem that i can relate to like no other. the feeling of lost, hopelessness, hurt, feeling alone in a corner of the dark. i love this poem especially this part: : 'Now it feels like the whole world is crashing down on me I dont have no way to protect myself there is nowhere to hide i now know what i am, i am trapped in the darkness' amazing poem. youre very creative and you have voice through your writing which is a special gift that most people have to work hard for. Great job i really enjoyed it :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/23/2024 11:50:40 AM # 1.0.0.1119
A really relatable poem...'All possiblities slowly faded away from me Now it feels like the whole world is crashing down on me'...know that feeling well...beautifuuly written..well don..thanks for the invite. i shall continue to read more of your work. -SG