The Darkness Poem by rayne kitten

The Darkness

Rating: 1.9


the darkness comes in the night
the darkness couses lots of fright
here and there the creepys crawl
in the darkness thay call home
creatures gater in the streets
to see the darkness sweep up there treats
here thay flood and there tha wait
wanting to see whut it holds
but do not fear
and do not hide
for the darkness has come and gone

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Subham Dutta 17 April 2009

Hi Rayne Kitten, It's a very good poem.

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Nic Leisure 20 April 2009

good job i loved it keep up the good work

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 30 April 2009

Yeah darkness comes to go away...........Good Write...........

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Lady Black Rose 01 May 2009

wow..thats deep! ! ! sometimes i feel like i have to hide from the darkness...good write...(^_^)

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Reetessh Sabrr 01 May 2009

good write full of guiding light

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 10 June 2010

good thing darkness has gone and now welcome the light of a new day!

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 24 September 2009

rayne Kitten, you speak loud and clear of 'the darkness'. I like it very much.I'm rating this poem a 10 for its content. Keep writing, set your computer on spell check.

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Keith Hendrickson 24 September 2009

very nice flow. great piece from top to bottom

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Carol Gall 22 September 2009

a simple poem about darkness

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Shekhar Joshi 22 September 2009

the last line stands out.........good poem...... liked it - spelling mistakes....... ;)

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