The Dancer Dances! Poem by Keith Gwilliams

The Dancer Dances!

Rating: 4.8


As the smoke drifts in the shadows
Quiet now with bolted doors
No more crowds – just empty tables
Round the dark and silent floor
From the stillness glides a figure
In a shirt and faded jeans
As from nowhere beats a rhythm
And a melody begins

The dancer dances – dance – dance on.

In the street beneath the lamplight
There he dances all alone
While the rhythm that he follows
Keeps on pounding till the dawn
Where’s he come from? What’s his purpose?
Is his dancing just a prayer?
What’s he hiding? What’s the mystery?
Is it something he can’t share?

There’s an anger in his footstep
And a fear that makes him fly
And the echo of his sorrow
Is the tear that’s in his eye
In the darkness of a dream world
The dancer hurries on
Till the daylight of the dawn break
When suddenly he’s gone.

The dancer dances – dance – dance on.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sid John Gardner. 27 October 2008

Great use of imagry and rhyme...Also a little pathos... Sounds like the aftermath Of an otherwise happy event, only the shadows of an uneasy spirit left to haunt... Sid.

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Francesca Johnson 26 October 2008

Wonderful stuff. There's a whole gamut of images and emotions in this piece. This is the second of yours I have read and I'm sure I will read more. Excellent, David. Love, Fran xx

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