The Curse That Has Changed My Life Poem by Asif Andalib
The Curse That Has Changed My Life
I saw you from a distance
I thought you were pretty
But you were an average
Girl of the big city
I didn't want to break your heart
So I broke mine
That was a foolish thing to do
Since we were fine
Your parents went against us
So I stop seeing you
I thought I shouldn't love you
So I found someone new
When you heard about the girl
You couldn't believe your ears
So you wanted to meet me
To prove you had the wrong fears
But then I broke your heart into
Thousands of pieces
Now I am lonely and long for
Your warm sweet kisses
You warned me if I hurt that girl
I would repent
Now I understand you were right
Hundred percent
I didn't want to break your heart So I broke mine That was a foolish thing to do Since we were fine Very realistic bent of mind.Poetrys realisation start with this natural orginal sin of understanding oneself in the ways variant.Well done
Your poem tells a story with such stark honesty, i really enjoyed it.
Very romantic. May you are in a haste to make another choice. Many do not know that 'love is lke a river that flows. Good poem.
I love the honesty in this poem, it's funny how reflection after the fact gives us a clarity we weren't able to see at the time. Nice writing and smooth phrasing. Loved it. I also invite you to browse through my posted poems.
This poem tells that true love is real and always stay long. the poetry lines are well said. I love it.
A very nice piece of work for us to learn from you as well. Thanks for sharing it with us. E.K.L.
Can't wait for the next installment. What did that hurt girl do to you?
contains all a romantic poem does. intense love, loss, pain sorrow yearning for what is lost. fabulous write!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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That is such a great poem! It is so well written and I loved it!