Ruby Mostazir

Rookie - 22 Points (dhaka)

The Colour OF Death


As much as i tried to escape
Life tied me up so much,

Wel, let da life going on
Da way it used to go n mess
But death should be exclusive & elite.......

I think death is always exclusive & unusual
It coloured by the colour of sovereignty?


(Ami muktir jonno paliye jete chailam joto
Toto e holam bondi......

Jibon ta jemon temon katuk apotti nai
kintu mrittu ta shundor howa chai,
Naki mrittu shob shomoy e shundor

Muktir rong e rongin?)

Submitted: Monday, April 15, 2013
Edited: Monday, April 15, 2013

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  • Freshman - 1,032 Points Tiku . (4/18/2013 5:24:00 AM)

    very nice.straight from the heart.you like it or not death would come one day.we can only wish for the best. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,862 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (4/15/2013 10:32:00 AM)

    It coloured by the colour of sovereignty? Its true if death comes let it come but with the elite, dignified(A sacrifice for the nation or for good work in fact this poem carries a lot the meaning, desire or quest for freedom made slave. bongla poem is replica of the English with slight difference, Yet the poem is the ocean a lot of rivers fell on it.thank you.....deserve the highest (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 27,319 Points Gajanan Mishra (4/15/2013 5:39:00 AM)

    shob shundor, mrittu, ashona aamar passke. Aame proshtut aachhe. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 27,319 Points Gajanan Mishra (4/15/2013 5:38:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem really. I love death. I want death as it most beautiful. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 27,319 Points Gajanan Mishra (4/15/2013 5:36:00 AM)

    mrittu shob shomoy e shundor. Muktir rong e rongin. wonderful Ruby, my dear poet. You are really a great poet. thanks. (Report) Reply

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