The Climb Poem by Hunter Dasten

The Climb

Rating: 4.5


Tragedy surrounds us in this life.
The seeds of Hatred, Cruelty, and Oppression,
easily grow to rival the heights of Redwood forests.
It's so easy to find yourself lost in this cold dark world.
But I promise you together we can breach the canopy,
and from our perch we will see the sunlight!
As it reveals bliss too is boundless,
If you're willing to make the climb.

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Keep climbing hunter! Well done.

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Whisperkwane Lamb 04 March 2010

Very wellv put short and bitter/sweet...like life...or a climber...'who's affraid of Virgina Wolfe' smile...locked door...shaded windows...is fear..of flying...I see you know much about...fear...good...very good...thanks for sharing...

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Sally Carter 09 July 2009

I love short, simple and vivid, and this ticks all the boxes. Thank you for the optimistic picture you paint.

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i relly like this poem very good

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Chhavi Anupam 06 July 2009

Beautiful. Have also liked the liitle girl.... Chhavi

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