The Cigar Poem by Double A P SS

i am yet to read a better poem. kudos Double A P SS.

an unusual, enigmatic write

when you touch me, I feel ill............very informative verse! when people aren't aware of their health issues until the day arrives with diseased notes. I had written so many poems on addiction and those poem did not get any comment and appreciated except a few of the poets such as Rajendran Muthiah, Raj Arumugam, Chandra T and others agreed with the idea of those poems! well written! Thank you for sharing! Let us fight against these evils! As I have only one account in PH, I am able to vote for you once only! sorry! ! !

nice description an excellent piece poetry

The maxim that 'smoking is injurious to your health' has been applied emotionally in the poem. Let us look at these meaningful lines: When you touch me / I can see the world for what it really is / When you touch me / I feel ill / You have become my addiction.

A nice poem on the topic that warn to be used..addiction many suffer..nice..

the last sentence could be completed this way.....when you touch me I feel / my lung getting exhausted to extract pure air I need to live long nights on earth.... Good touch.

I congratulate you to selected as the member for this poem The cigar. A nice penning with a message.. When you touch me I feel ill..... thank you

Congratulation, A.P.SS for this poem being selected as the poem of the Day by the PH...Keep writing! !